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Offline Karanis Final Goodbye

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Compromise
« on: May 03, 2008, 01:03:57 PM »
I am willing to compromise on My ending.

You want me in camp to do, I wont come.

So I've decided that I WILL rp it out, however, it'll be here because I know what the reaction will be, and will be surprised if it actually stays posted.

but I am Karanis, and will have a Karanis style leaving, so here goes...and of course, its written in Queen of Force Posting style, as I am so very fond of it.  I do love my imagination so, and know that the comments will reflect your distaste of it, and the falicy of it, but there are a few things, well one in particular that I just have to do before I leave, hence, the additional ending post that I deem necessary.

setup:  evening, everyone around as Kar leaving might just draw a bit of attention, firelight bright......everyone more or less around Dragonslair wondering what will happen.

*listening to your speech about how you dont trust me, and that its done, having already been packed for 3 months, realizing that life here will not be what I thought it would be once, leaving the reminiscing time for a more convenient time to think about when I'm on my own, seeing out of the corner of my eye that mother has the kailla and ruck sacks ready for departure*

"fine *shrugging, leaning against the weapons rack with my arms folded across my chest,* if that's the way its gonna be, that's the way its gonna be *knowing that I probably will not make it out of the camp alive after what I'm about to do, and thinking to Myself that I dont really care because it will be worth it*

*raising an eyebrow to you*  it is done then, never to return, as you wish.  goodbye Ragnar Dragonsfury.

*and walking straight over to Raziel before anyone can realize what I'm doing, especially Raziel, I walk over, place my hands on either side of his cheeks and plant the most passionate, closed eyed, tongue in cheek kiss on Raziel's lips that anyone in this camp has ever seen, breathing in His very essence and placing the memory in the permanently saved bank of My memories, and breaking the kiss just as quickly, my mother shrieking in disbelief and knowing that her daughter is about to be killed or collared or both, rides in hard with her kailla, having Ibet's reins in hand, I leap up a few steps and jump right on Ibet, reining him around kicking up dust, grinning ear to ear and exclaiming*

"by the GODS I've always wanted to DO that to Him" *still looking at Raziel and quickly but still in Kar fashion with an emblazoned grin*  "meet Me on the plains, we'll find a ROCK"  *laughs a full out belly laugh knowing full well it would never happen as not even Raziel had ever known about my obviously very private feelings for Raziel that have been hidden for years*

*still laughing as I send a wink and a gorgeous ear to ear smile, spin Ibet around and bound full speed for the main camp fire and leaping in full Kar fashion over the camp fire and nodding to mum that it was definitely time to go, knowing that I would never make it out of camp alive, but by the GODS it was worth it*


the end.

((I know full well that I would never make it out of camp after doing that, and even knowing that, I STILL dont care, cause it STILL was worth it, just imagining it...........was worth it))

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Re: Compromise
« Reply #1 on: May 03, 2008, 01:54:32 PM »
I am willing to compromise on My ending.

You want me in camp to do, I wont come.

So I've decided that I WILL rp it out, however, it'll be here because I know what the reaction will be, and will be surprised if it actually stays posted.

but I am Karanis, and will have a Karanis style leaving, so here goes...and of course, its written in Queen of Force Posting style, as I am so very fond of it.  I do love my imagination so, and know that the comments will reflect your distaste of it, and the falicy of it, but there are a few things, well one in particular that I just have to do before I leave, hence, the additional ending post that I deem necessary.

setup:  evening, everyone around as Kar leaving might just draw a bit of attention, firelight bright......everyone more or less around Dragonslair wondering what will happen.

*listening to your speech about how you dont trust me, and that its done, having already been packed for 3 months, realizing that life here will not be what I thought it would be once, leaving the reminiscing time for a more convenient time to think about when I'm on my own, seeing out of the corner of my eye that mother has the kailla and ruck sacks ready for departure*

"fine *shrugging, leaning against the weapons rack with my arms folded across my chest,* if that's the way its gonna be, that's the way its gonna be *knowing that I probably will not make it out of the camp alive after what I'm about to do, and thinking to Myself that I dont really care because it will be worth it*

*raising an eyebrow to you*  it is done then, never to return, as you wish.  goodbye Ragnar Dragonsfury.

*and walking straight over to Raziel before anyone can realize what I'm doing, especially Raziel, I walk over, place my hands on either side of his cheeks and plant the most passionate, closed eyed, tongue in cheek kiss on Raziel's lips that anyone in this camp has ever seen, breathing in His very essence and placing the memory in the permanently saved bank of My memories, and breaking the kiss just as quickly, my mother shrieking in disbelief and knowing that her daughter is about to be killed or collared or both, rides in hard with her kailla, having Ibet's reins in hand, I leap up a few steps and jump right on Ibet, reining him around kicking up dust, grinning ear to ear and exclaiming*

"by the GODS I've always wanted to DO that to Him" *still looking at Raziel and quickly but still in Kar fashion with an emblazoned grin*  "meet Me on the plains, we'll find a ROCK"  *laughs a full out belly laugh knowing full well it would never happen as not even Raziel had ever known about my obviously very private feelings for Raziel that have been hidden for years*

*still laughing as I send a wink and a gorgeous ear to ear smile, spin Ibet around and bound full speed for the main camp fire and leaping in full Kar fashion over the camp fire and nodding to mum that it was definitely time to go, knowing that I would never make it out of camp alive, but by the GODS it was worth it*


the end.

((I know full well that I would never make it out of camp after doing that, and even knowing that, I STILL dont care, cause it STILL was worth it, just imagining it...........was worth it))

*I watch without the slightest sign of emotion on my face. Yes... it is done. I say nothing in reply to your words of goodbye. I already know this is staged only to deepen the hurt and disappointment you have already brought to Tuchuk.*

*I continue to watch as you approach Raziel and kiss him, displaying your actual self for all to see. Still I show no emotion. This is not my burden to bear. This dishonor does fall squarely upon you, for all this time, all these years, your love is now shown to not be true. Certainly there are those who take offense to this... but a simple raising of my hand stays their movements and hushes those gathered. Kitria is permitted to ride in and play out the farce.*

*None say a word or make a move as Karanis voices her secret desire ofter all this time, dissappointing, but not surprising as so lil surprises or shocks me anymore. The disgrace she brings upon herself with her actions and words is more than I could ever levy against her. Tuchuk will stand in judgement of her now for all time. I need say nothing to them.*

* My hand still stays the actions of all in Tuchuk. There is no need to halt her leaving. It would only serve to draw out her display of disloyalty to me, as well as her position in Tuchuk. Her display shows well what lay beneath the Woman's outer appearance. It shows where her heart has been even while sharing my furs. It shows the value of her allegiance to Tuchuk and her responsibilities as Ubara through the years. Indeed.... there is nothing I could do that would even come close to what she has just done to herself.*

*They are allowed to run away... unimpeded... alive... judged by those in witness. My honor intact as I have remained faithful to my word and my oath. The word not yet given in agreement by Karanis that the companionship is over. So while still companioned she has further shown her true self to all. There should be no problem now in petitioning Council to dissolve the Companionship to Karanis.*

*I remain standing in place after those gathered go about their business. I am glad she did not place her lips to mine, for the lies would have been tasted heavy upon them. I hold no blame against Raziel. To my knowledge he has done nothing to invite these attentions upon himself.*


*At least now she has shown herself. It is out in the open for all to see. Now it is up to her to live or die with that upon her shoulders. I shall only wish her well.*

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Re: Compromise
« Reply #2 on: May 03, 2008, 02:53:07 PM »
After getting kailla and ruck sacks ready..not knowing what Karanis had in mind, I lead them out from behind my wagon. Watching and hearing my daughter...my eyes widen at the slight nod from Ubar on seeing me come from behind the wagon. My mind races to understand to what is happening.

Kar approaches Raz, sets a steamy kiss on his lips, and walks towards me. I know Kar and her thinking..knowing exactly why she did so..knowing everyone else would think the worst..knowing Kar knew that also.

She flung herself onto the back of her kailla and in Kar style, left the camp. Leaving me to to follow in the cloud of dust.

Still trying to get the sense of things..I figure it is about time I go on a long trek to find  ..Kar's father...not finding another I cherished as much.

I know I am leaving Tuchuk probably for good. For 12 years it has been my home. I have seen many changes..some good..and some bad..people have come and gone for many reasons..Now I am one of those going for reasons of my own that have nothing to do with Kar...knowing that no one will be believe me..knowing that I never lie..but it will be thought by many..too bad they are wrong.

My kailla takes me past the sentinels..as I I slip into the night..going as I had come so long ago.

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Re: Compromise
« Reply #3 on: May 03, 2008, 02:59:18 PM »
*Watches you go and wishes you well silently.*

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Re: Compromise
« Reply #4 on: May 05, 2008, 12:13:57 AM »
*Having been out on the plains and on patrol, only to return for some ceremony or meeting, I stand and watch*

*A Tuchuk eyebrow quirked watching what is happening, a quick look around as Kar approaches*

*SHOCK AND UTTER DISBELIEF AT WHAT JUST HAPPENED*

*Completely lost at what just happened as two long members leave*

*Clears my throat and looks around at those looking at me, and myself just as bewildered*

*I dont bother knocking the dust of the plains off my leathers and just stand there...all day and into the night...unmoving..simply shocked and wondering if everyone just lost their minds*

*words are finally muttered near the next morning*

How did I get brought into this?

Raz